Sunday, October 26th, 2008

Oh, good gravy!

Big Misunderstanding -- check.
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How the heck did I actually think it was okay to SUBMIT this!?

It was about an hour later, when suddenly, I heard a scrabbling near the entrance to the alley.

gyaaaaaarf!

The edited version:

They'd been hunkering behind their meager cover for an hour when Shannon heard something scrabbling near the entrance to the alley.

Which still needs work, I'm the first one to admit, but at least it has some more content in it.
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Saturday, September 27th, 2008

Finished the expanded outline for the untitled Gay Young Adult Fantasy. I'll format it tomorrow (and Monday, if it takes that long) with character and setting details, then stick it into a drawer until NaNoWriMo.
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Wednesday, September 17th, 2008

chapter 1 scene 2

start: 1,146
end: 1,205
+59
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Tuesday, September 16th, 2008

chapter 1 scene 1

original: 1,803
new: 1,953
+150 words
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Head? Still asplodey.

Fridge? Cleaned out but not scrubbed down.

Crits? First round done.

Essay? Still not edited. I may just say "fuck it."

Also, I read through an old third-person version of the first scene of CoSaD. Even rough as it is, I think it may be closer to my vision for the book than the more traditional first person. I may give her some first-person "progress reports" to get a hint of her voice.
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Monday, September 15th, 2008

So I mailed out Unlocked to Tor. I would've been a bit bouncier about it if I hadn't had to stagger to the Post Office despite the migraine.

While writing an essay for Freshman Comp about the triathlon I did over the summer, the bug re-bit me. These are the ones I'm considering

In December: http://www.tinseltriathlon.com/index.html

In March: http://www.pasadenatriathlon.com/

Anyway, staring at the screen is making my brain hurt, so ... off to bed.
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Sunday, August 31st, 2008

*headdesk*

Oh, man. There are a few places where Elissa crosses the line into Too Stoopid To Live.

I'm sure I CAN fix it -- there's a solid throughline and a strong MC -- but it's gonna be a lot of work. Really, I'm not sure it's worth the effort.

I guess it's a matter of am I throwing good time after bad? Or wouid that time be better spent on another WIP?

But I guess when compared to the time investment of writing a first draft, the time required to outline it isn't all THAT bad. And once I see its skeleton, I'll be better able to judge how much work I've actually got to do.
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Saturday, August 30th, 2008

Dear Universe: Could This Be Construed As A Hint?

I was reading about favorite monsters on the FM boards, and cursed weapons came up.

That's it. I'm gonna add Elissa's Quest to the revision queue.
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Tuesday, August 26th, 2008

Jecine story draft done

Got a late second wind (right before I took the trileptal, funny that) and finished writing the new scenes. The current draft is a total of 81519 words, 184 scenes. So I'm gonna stick it in the file cabinet for a month before I go back through it scene-by-scene.

Next, make the synopsis for Unlocked make sense ... and of course, work on Giving Red.
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Saturday, August 23rd, 2008

I hate synopsifying.

I've got everything down. In the morning, I'll check to see whether it actually makes sense.
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Thursday, August 21st, 2008

TWoN Re-Outline -- DONE

167 total scenes
105 complete scenes
62 new scenes to be written
50/50 scenes for the FM Outline Marathon
12 stubs in need of expansion.

So I'll stick it in a drawer for a month or two, and see if it still makes sense when I pull it back out.
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Monday, August 18th, 2008

untitled: Jecine's Story: 2 scenes, 423 words
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78,584 / 90,000
(86.0%)


untitled: the WIP formerly known as The Whore of Northport
plotted out 15 new scenes for Ettani, and another 2 in Damira's (main character's) thread, which brings me to 43/50 for the FM outline marathon

Unlocked
synopsized chapters 4, 5, and 6

Now I'm gonna go and do some longhand writing, and go to bed.
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untitled: Jecine's Story
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78,163 / 90,000
(86.0%)

Two scenes yesterday, and two today. Half were planned, and half were added on the fly.

untitled: formerly known as The Whore of Northport
plotted out 14 additional Vanio scenes (plus 12 yesterday for his mom brings me just over halfway through FM's outline marathon.)

Scrawled a few lines in HB3.

I finally feel like partial (rather than complete) crap. I'm going to bed.
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Saturday, August 16th, 2008

General Thoughts on the Whore of Northport

In the beginning it was Damira's story; in the end, it's an ensemble piece. Which ... I think may be a good thing.

I'm going to be doing FM's outlining challenge over the next week; I'm going to plot out the story arcs for some of the secondary characters, to show what they've been up to all this time.

I think I'm going to have to change the name, though, since it's no longer Damira's story. Maybe The Heroes of Northport?
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Tuesday, August 12th, 2008

Multiple Projects ... the Current Philosophy

I'm at the point in my "career" when I'm trying to get a lot of work out there and circulating. But every time I've tried to do it before, I've faltered. I've only had one manuscript, The Coming Storm, out there on a semi-consistent basis. Leisure/Dorchester, my next destination for Unlocked, needs a synopsis (I hate synopses), City of Sun and Darkness needs another go-through to solidify the theme, but I don't want to lose my momentum of Jecine.

Always before, I've been trying to edit one project at a time. Do a second draft, do something else, do a third draft, do something else, lather, rinse, repeat. Because I'd need to take some time away from the project -- just a month -- but it would extend because I'd be involved in drafting something else ...

And so it went.

Now, I'm trying something different. Rather than going full steam ahead on one project, risking burnout, I've decided to break it up into little projects, that should take about half an hour a day. I've got them prioritized; start at the top and work my way down. Depending on how much I've done that day, I can do one of them or all of them.

So far, it seems to be working. We shall see.
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untitled: Jecine's story: 493 words
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77,546 / 90,000
(85.0%)


The Whore of Northport 80/100 scenes analyzed.
And wow. They seem to be doing a Deathly-Hallows-esque amount of time wandering through the woods. Um ... needs changing. But I'll do another 10 scenes tomorrow and Friday (Thursday's my birthday, and the midnight release of Clone Wars; I'm not going to even PRETEND that I'm gonna get anything done. That'll get me ready for FM's outline marathon, which I hope will give me a road map for eventual new scenes.

Unlocked 3/27 chapters synopsified

In other news, my hand is apparently a cat toy ...

In other other news ... </bi> is NOT on my goal list. :p
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Monday, August 11th, 2008

Updates

untitled: Jecine's story -- 653 new words
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77,012 / 90,000
(84.0%)


The Whore of Northport -- 25 scenes analyzed
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70 / 100
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The Coming Storm -- mailed out

untitled: Gay Young Adult Fantasy -- POV character bios

hand-writing -- done

Unlocked -- scene overview printed out for synopsifyin'
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So The Coming Storm is winging its way to New York City and its (hopefully) fateful meeting with Roc. *crosses fingers*

In not-so-great news, I was so wrapped up in watching the Olympics last night that I forgot to move my truck for street sweeping. *sigh* It's not like I couldn't have used the 44 bucks. But at least it's not as bad as Port Hueneme, which was almost $200.

Hobbes sulked all last night, but she's finally forgiven me. :)
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Sunday, August 10th, 2008

revisions on Jecine

1,101 words today
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76,358 / 90,000
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